Thoughts, Opinions, Reviews of the Story

Skeletons can smile? What???

Anyways, it was ok, not really boring but just feels kind of short even with that much text. You should make it longer, and try to work on them more often if you can.

Yes skeletons can smile....more evilish smile tho? lol

I'll try, i just got sick of this chapter lol so i never really wanted to write it. Next chapter should be a bit better.

I love that the story is branching away from the idea that all fomors are evil and stuff. Them Goblins have character! ~ I sense plot twisting <3

Maybe next time when you go into one of these dungoens you should think of how the goblins feel eh? lol

lol thinking about how goblins feel, interesting. After ive killed so many

nouqnosliw wrote:Maybe next time when you go into one of these dungoens you should think of how the goblins feel eh? lol

What about the kobolds, the imps, the ogres, and the hobgoblins?

I don't think think trolls have feelings thou, and I am not talking about internet trolls. >.>

To reply apolloo's request for more love in the story...I have thought about it. My problem lies in who to love and who not. Especially when I'm trying to use mostly/only real people, and not make up characters. However....I'll try, but dont count on it xD

ah that chapter was good. lol if u do throw in love scenes , this is going to get interesting . Its like 3 am and im still up, so tired

Love scenes are freaking hard lol. Its why I only got a 75% on my stories in school before...but yeah. And also...who to use for the love scenes?! that...idk either :/

SAAAXTON HAAALE.

Story.
Was Good.

comming along pretty good hmmm a title...

i just read 9/10 chapters of your story nouq, and im completely impressed...id read 10, but its after midnight so i save it for tomorrow. say you got room for me in it if you gunna keep goin'? (again havent read chapter 10 ) but either way, GOOD JOB, im very impressed ^^

Yup I can get you in the story too! I'll think of a way to get you in. And thanks for reading it

And yaz, why the hate on your bro? Lol

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can my bunny be in your story?

Bunny? :O why

it feels left out D:

Maybe the title was here all along The EwecaClowns, or maybe Ewecaclowns vs. Fomors i dunno just trying to help with ideas

he made me angry for something that i forgot lol
but u can still kill him if u put him in which would make sense , cause he basically quit the game .

Btw, you should make a chapter where my characters die.

Just saying.

Well, I could do that. I'll think of something

Teehee. The Story is great! You've really got some talent there, Nouq. . Also, read my PM. >_>

i like the part where izan pulls his hood up , idk but just pictured it to look cool
*waits for the next part*

Just an update about the story that no one cares about anymore. The last chapter will probably come out sometime during this next month. By last chapter...I mean I won't be writing any more to it. Its NOT a conclusion chapter, just a continuation of what was planned. The rest of the story is all in your own mind. And if you're wondering why....well I'll explain that when the chapter actually comes out.